I forgot to answer some of your questions in the last entry. I don’t think your query needs to be super informative. I think of it more as a cliffhanger or at least a little sample so the agent is left wanting more. Would I want to read the story based on that query? Not really. It doesn’t really give the story justice, which I have read–and love. That picture is hilarious considering how unrelated it all is.
Let me know when the elliptical comes. I hope you put it in front of a TV–especially on The Vampire Diaries days. I’m lucky I never got really into that show. Wouldn’t want to be hopelessly obsessed, like a certain wizard I know.
—MEGATRON OUT BITCHES
P.S. I can kick the Incredible Hulk’s ass. Just holler if he gives you trouble…
P.S.S. Oh and we got a comment from a stranger (but not quite as strange as us). You obviously know this since you approved it, but tis exciting is it not!?